Dear Evelyn, your writing is now well aligned to the topic you had been assigned, and you have explored it adequately. It is commendable that your writing is highly engaging and easy to understand. However, try to utilize more simple sentences in the future. It helps to eliminate ambiguities created by long and complicated sentences. Finally, the reference page is not necessary.
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Dear Evelyn, your writing is now well aligned to the topic you had been assigned, and you have explored it adequately. It is commendable that your writing is highly engaging and easy to understand. However, try to utilize more simple sentences in the future. It helps to eliminate ambiguities created by long and complicated sentences. Finally, the reference page is not necessary.